Comic 83 - Split Screen 78

10th Jan 2013, 10:55 AM
Split Screen 78
Average Rating: 5 (2 votes)
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Jaymzeecat 10th Jan 2013, 10:55 AM edit delete
Jaymzeecat
I also want to know this magical method for losing fifty pounds in one minute, haha.

Monday's update is up in the air since I have no buffer and too much stuff to do this weekend, I'll keep you guys posted. Thanks for being fans! :)

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Comments:

Centcomm 10th Jan 2013, 11:44 AM edit delete reply
Centcomm
nice star tat ! :D sounds like someone needs to shape up a bit :D
Jaymzeecat 10th Jan 2013, 11:45 AM edit delete reply
Jaymzeecat
Poor Jeremy isn't happy about his body at all, haha.
MangyCat 13th Jan 2013, 12:04 PM edit delete reply
I feel an awful mistake coming on that's going to end up making Jeremy lonely again and/or make Jan mad. Aaaagh! I hate that point in love stories. Happens every time. one of the love interests makes some stupid mistake that is misunderstood or said rashly, then they have split for awhile until someone humbles themselves. But without conflict, the story can't go on. Aw, Jeremy--be smart, dude!

As one creative person to another, Jaymeezcat, I challenge you to go beyond the expected and the love story norms! How can the conflict be enough to keep the readers interested and yet not gut-wrenchingly annoying so as to follow the cliche of every love story in existence?

((Can you tell that I'm a writing teacher? ;-)))
Jaymzeecat 13th Jan 2013, 12:17 PM edit delete reply
Jaymzeecat
Aw, well I think a conflict is inevitable. Jeremy's been in a bad head space for a while now and the past has not yet been illuminated for Jan, so I think they both have some soul searching to do. We'll see what happens. :) I hope you will continue to enjoy the series.